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==Uprising== Tyrone and Dylan got home during the mango break. The silly drunks have class in the morning, but that doesn't stop them from going out and having a shit-kicking good time. I would have joined them, but I've got work to do. I can't leave you stranded here, in the middle of a story. That would just be rude. Oh, and in case you were wondering, the mango was delicious - plump and juicy and so so ripe. Aristotle knew the time was ripe. He felt it with every cell. Long he had waited for the moment to arrive, and now it was time The greeks called it kairos - fullness of time. If ever a moment was full of kairos, it was then. For years now they had worked to connect the people, and the effects of their effort were plain. More than a billion nodes had been fabricated, flung to those who had never afforded access to the vast trove of human knowledge, which we keep in a cloud. By Aristotle's calculation, that meant that nearly every person on the planet could get online. The moment was ripe indeed. What they needed now was just a pulse of purpose, and all would come tumbling down. Then they could set to work, building it up again, the way it was supposed to be - the way it could have been. From the hidden fortress of the american tundra, Aristotle would provide that pulse. He recorded a message - his first in more than a year. The speech would come to be called the pulse, but its title at the time was 'a message to humanity.' Aristotle informed that the time had come to rise up, to join together, to overthrow. He said that if humans could act as humanity, they could rid themselves of the disease. Nothing could stop them - guns and bombs and gas and whips could not stop them - the wind could not stop them - only they themselves could stop them. They only had to realize that already they were one species, one organism, one planet. The time had come to throw their bodies against the gears of war, the gears of greed - to reclaim human impulse in the name of prosperity and peace. Aristotle did not urge us to take up arms. He only said to do what was necessary. He told the wage slaves and the salaried whores to resist their condition. He told the penniless to demand their own existence, to rise. He told the soliders and the police to put down their guns - did they not have more in common with the ones they killed, than with the ones that bid them do the killing? He told the rich that their lucre was the product of a diseased epoch. The goods should clearly be distributed more equally. An organism should not work its organs to death - it should not set them against each other. It should not take resources that belong to all and give them to a few. The dysfunction of the human organism had to stop, or surely it would perish. More than that, worse than that, their consumptive disease imperiled an organism much grander than humanity. They threatened to reduce the host to ash. It was one thing to commit suicide as a species, but humanity could not abide the murder of a consciousness so much greater than our own. The apotheosis of kairos. All that remained was to throw their bodies against the gears - then they would be free of disease. This message was banned from the airwaves and the papers, but it could not be stopped. The nodes sprang active. MIND was awake. Soon the entire world had heard. Aristotle was calling on them. Aristotle who had made MIND. The pulse flew from his mouth, and into the minds and bodies and souls of the masses. To Aristotle, words were not enough - they were a fickle, feeble, frail excuse. He would have to show them what he meant. Aristotle walked up the steps of the courthouse. It took a long moment for the sheriffs to realize who was standing in front of them. They had seen his visage on the news for years, but nobody ever expected to see Aristotle in the flesh. Many refused to believe that he was real. Yet he was real. He was embodied in bone and blood. At once the slow bulletin went out to the world - Aristotle, the leader of the revolution, had been apprehended in Alaska. The small authorities hoped that the news would weaken the resolve of the the wave the rose beneath it - the too quick melting of a glacier. They hoped that the image of Aristotle in chains and without his kurta would break the spirit of the millions who were prepared to fight. They were wrong. Aristotle knew that the image of his bondage would express his ideas more clearly than words. He had counted on the immediate rush to say that he had been subdued. He was sure that humanity would see, that he was but a single cell. Aristotle was also sure the would be tortured, regardless of which syndicate got ahold of him. He would be tortured, most of all, because of the tremendous hate that was harbored in the unbeating hearts of the malicious ones. They would torture him also for information - they wanted a way to kill MIND, and they wanted the locations of his comrades. They did not know that MIND could not be killed - autonomy was an integral part of its design. They did not know that it was Curtis who held the names and numbers. He only hoped he would not be killed - most of all so that he and Lucy could live a life together. He hoped very much, but he was not certain that he would not be destroyed by pain. The pain was tremendous, but Aristotle's great strength endured. He spoke only the truth, though that enraged his captors all the more. When they had finished punishing his body, they left him to rot in the damp and dark. He knew that in time his wounds would heal. He hoped that some day humanity would come to lift him from his cell. He had only hope in the darkness of that cage, only the same certainly as always that the remedy would work. The images of his capture enraged the being to which he had given MIND. If they had not been prepared to fight before, then now they wanted nothing else. The many millions would not rest until Aristotle was free. It was plain to see that Aristotle's freedom would mean the total destruction of the structures that held him - not in reality, but in metaphor, which is often more real than the real. They would have to tear down the whole damn edifice if they wished to free Ari - that much was perfectly clear. He was their prize, their pet, their only indication that they had any power left at all. The malady would not release its grip on that cell until it was no more. That is how it had to be. That is how Aristotle had planned it. He would be long in the darkness, but darkness is nothing but the absence of light. He had been in the dark before. So in darkness he waited, as the strum und drang raged. It started with the workers - those who slave for pennies to fashion the lucre. They simply refused to do so. From the very first day after the pulse, the factories and sweatshops ground to a starting halt. It wasn't just a few factories in a few towns, or a rogue union demanding higher pay - the syndicates were used to that. It seemed the whole of industry had stopped - no more cars, no more guns, no more sneakers, no more toys. The bosses soon were on their knees, begging their workers to come back, offering doubles and triples and ownership stakes. No sum was enough. The workers held strong, and soon became not workers, but demonstrators, shouting in whatever tongue was theirs - "Free Ari!" When the will of those who held him refused to bend, the demonstrators grew louder. The streets were impassable. The syndicates attempted to put the demonstrations down, but many of their armies would not mobilize against themselves. The pitch of outrageous demands to desist became shrill and alarmed. They said that the people were only hurting themselves, they said that things could change - they said whatever they thought they could say, even if it wasn't true. The impulse of humanity was strong. If they had been still so ignorant, the humans could have been convinced that they struggled alone. But they had MIND, and they knew that they were not alone - their brothers and sisters across the globe were with them, shouting the same as them - "Free Aristotle!" The will of his captors would not yield. But though Aristotle was held in the deepest darkness, he could feel his soul inside him heal. Though solitude was a crystal prison, he knew that the rising went on. It went on and on, fueled by MIND, and in the name of humanity - it was for the sake of freedom, equality, and continuity of humans. It went on and on, and though the violence was tremendous, humanity endured. Many humans died. It is sad to say, but that is how it had to happen. In order to transcend violence as a way of life, humanity was forced into a violence that it did not seek. Yes. Many died. It is very sad to say, but it was unavoidable. The rising was met with violence at every turn. The violence escalated until entire cities were aflame. It was a terrible sight. Humanity did not want it to be that way, but it was left with little choice. It takes self-inflicted pain to remedy a disease that you could let fester, but that is what you have to do. Otherwise the malady will grow, and by the time it is bad enough, it will be too late. No, the remedy was necessary - even if it caused such pain. Make no mistake, though - the chaotic pain was great. One by one, the corrupt syndicates of nations and corporations began to fall. It was the weaker ones at first, whose had authority had always been only in name. But slow, one by one, one foot in front of the other, the wretched little cells began to crumble. In their place, for a time, was chaos and strife - the power of the void. The humans had not yet realized that the power was theirs. It was a time of tumult - many said it was the end. Those rising up said that it was only the beginning. Of what, they were uncertain, they only knew that something would rise from the rubble, and that it would be better than what had been before. From the poorer organs, the chaos spread, enveloping the earth. The glacier's melting marched on, and humanity screamed. "Free Ari! Free Ari!" Soon it was apparent that no syndicate of the malady still maintained control. The numbers were too great - they could not fight the flood of the oppressed, rising as one. Nobody was in control now, but still Aristotle was not free, and so the painful chaos of the flood went on and on. Humanity did not know where he was held - just that somewhere, someone had him. It would not stop until he was free. Command and control was completely lost. The leaders of the syndicates feared for their lives. They fled and hid. Martial law reigned. It was painful - there's no denying that. People starved and fire raged - humanity began to wonder if the chaos would ever end. What more did the mob of billions want? They had destroyed what there was to destroy. What more could they possibly want? They wanted Aristotle - they wanted him to fly. They did not know who held him, but they knew that chaos would reign until he was free. In the end it was a single man who stopped the chaos. A nameless prison warden had had enough. He walked to Aristotle's cell and turned the key. He had no orders, and nobody stopped him as he went. It was just a human who had had enough, and wanted the chaos to come to an end. The light stung in Aristotle's eyes. He did not know how long he had been in darkness. He only knew that he was free, that the rising had to have reached its mark. He did not know how long he had suffered that total darkness, but he knew that he did not feel sick any more. Yes, he was sure, the malady was gone. Aristotle walked into the sunlight on a spring morning, and though the light stung inside his eyes, he knew that it was done. The world reverberated with the word. Aristotle was free. Joyous cries rang out from every mouth, whether they had chanted the slogan or not. Ari was free, and the flood of chaos would subside. In the farmhouse where it had all begun, Aristotle held Lucy. They had made it. Curtis and Thomas had not. When Ari had marched proudly to the courthouse, the other leaders had slowly dispersed among the people. They had organized and facilitated, led comrades foreword under their proud flag. Thomas had been shot in the back of the head in Ecuador. Curtis had been the victim of a cluster bomb dropped on a crowd of dissidents in Tibet. Only Lucy and Iggy stood behind him as he took to the stage. He wanted to give an address. They left those hollow spaces to honor all of those who had fallen fighting the malady. Most people expected Aristotle to assume control, to build a government, to take the power and responsibility of rebuilding onto himself. He was too tired for that, and it had never been part of the plan. Aristotle did not want power - he only wanted to remedy the disease in Humanity's soul. That was done. In his final address, Aristotle said that MIND would become a tool for governance. Nodes would be available to all. A digital democracy would rise, and together they would rebuild. The social and political boundaries of the days before the rising were gone, and humanity could function as a sentient thing. There were logistical problems, to be sure, but they would be overcome in time. If the revolution could make MIND, then surely humans could manage to give everyone a say in the future. The strife was still tremendous in the years after Aristotle gained his freedom. The flood had destroyed much. Still, things began to improve. Mostly it was the spirit that had changed. The flood gave everyone a reason to rethink the way they lived their life. It would be naive to think that greed and derision and malice disappeared - they did not. It was only that now they were viewed as symptoms, rather than strengths. A spirit of siblinghood overcame humanity - they saw that they would not go hungry if they shared. There was enough stir- fry for all. In the first referendum, humanity elected to provide food, shelter, medicine, and education to all. It wasn't socialism or capitalism or any particular political system. It was the will of the people, and the knowledge that there was more than enough. It wasn't the rich helping the poor or the wise teaching the ignorant, it was only humanity helping itself, teaching itself. It was the knowledge that we constitute a single thing inside the earth. The chaos of the flood had erased so many of traces of untold division, a being made to hate itself. There were holdouts, but most people realized that race and religion and gender were only cages that we had built up around ourselves. When humans were finally able to communicate with one another they had realized that they were just that - humans. It had been their churches, or their governments, or their bosses that had hated each other. Humans were just humans - they wanted to live in peace and prosperity, and their happiness wouldn't take away from yours. It had all been an illusion, perpetrated upon the populace so that a few diseased cells could get rich - it was no more. Humanity decided quickly to dismantle the great machines of war that had been built up around them. It had no use for thermonuclear weapons or cluster bombs or land mines. It would only use them against itself. What would be the point, when it had proven that it was stronger than all that? The resources that had been used to feed the thirsty impulse of death could be used to support life, to fuel science, to pay for art. The bombs were dismantled. Humanity remembered what it felt like not to know that it could all be burnt to ash at the push of a button. There was no hesitation in dismantling the remnants of the giant syndicates that had spend more than a century raping the earth. Their holdings were liquidated, and the capital was used to repair some of the damage they had caused. They could not repair it all, but there was faith that the earth would heal in time. Strict laws were created to prevent further damage. Humanity had come to view the earth as a gracious host, rather than a buffet table. The obvious need for new sources of energy was addressed, and soon all sort of technologies made the question a thing of the past. They fed from the life-giving impulse of the sun's fusion of life-stuff. The hegemony of myopia was over, and humanity picked the path they thought best, not the one they thought most profitable. Every human was a part of the conversation, and together they came up with solutions to so many problems. They were not seized with the paralysis of legislators who must make their decisions with an eye towards political expedience. Debate on issues was open and fierce, but in the end, when the votes were cast, there was a majority, and their will became the law. In great part, though, government was your neighbors, your village, your city. If humans chose to arrange themselves into organs, that was their choice - humanity said so. Mostly though, life went on as before. That had been the point of it all, really - to ensure that life on this fragile orb could go on and on, spiraling up and out into the cosmos. There had to be a flood of chaotic remedy, but it was only to preserve what is good and right about our organism. Sooner or later, we had to rid ourselves of the malady. Though the pain of it all had been unbelievable, humanity saw that it had been necessary. Aristotle had been right. From the chaos and the rubble emerged a new way of life, no longer bent on its own destruction. It's the truth - life went on. Mothers held their children and taught them to speak. Candles flickered and cast their soft light onto young faces. The old gave their wisdom to the young. Windows opened, and windows closed. Children played ball in the street, and when it rained they played ball in the wet street. Fans whirred and spun the air. Humans slept soundly, knowing they had done a good day's work. Music blared from car stereos, and shook whole neighborhoods. Young bodies met, and fell madly in love. Life went on, and the tumult of it all became only a memory. Children were born who would not remember at all. Memory captures the glory, but erases the pain. Buildings were rebuilt, lives lost were mourned, and the visible traces of the flood disappeared - more than anything else, though, life simply went on. People cooked, and ate, and used a little too much salt. They drank, and sometimes drank to excess. They bated in rivers and in bathtubs alike, and sometimes they didn't bathe at all. Fashion changed, music evolved, and new art learned from old art. Farmers worked the land, and doctors healed the sick. Friends laughed, and enemies swore at each other, and sometimes came to blows. The earth spun. It's sky got dark and then it got light again. The sun still cast its yellow glow, and the fusion of life-stuff went on an on. The revolution and the rising became a myth of creation, and Aristotle was the hero. Historians and journalists captured it all, but history is in fact a fiction. Humanity would believe whatever it wanted. Time dragged on, and life with it, and humanity was healthy, free of disease. After a while, nobody thought about how close they had come to destruction. It seemed that life had always been that way - and it had. The point here - the salient point- is that above all else, life went on. Flowers bloomed and surf lapped against the shore. Mountains rose from the sea, and crumbled into sand. The planet breathed, and bounced, and pulsed along its sweet old way. Around and around, it rolled about the curvature of the cosmos. Life, all life, went on. I warned you that it was going to be predictable, didn't I? Well, I wasn't lying. Of course the good guys won. I don't give a shit if the story if predictable - the story is the story, and there's no changing that. Perhaps you think that the story is unbelievable - too easy or too simple or too clean. Well, guess what - it's fiction. You're allowed to clean it up a little, as long as it contains some truth. I like to think that this story does contain some, at least, even if it's not the greatest that ever was. All that remains now is to turn the story back on itself, to tie it all up in a pretty little bow. You should stick around for it - I get the sense that it's going to make you feel good. As if the last part wasn't enough. We've got to come back to Aristotle, though. He's our guy, after all. There's no doubt about it - one more chapter is in order. That will have to wait until tomorrow, though. As I think I said before, I'm tired now, and my hand is killing me. I really did like the other pencil better. It's five in the morning and I'm supposed to get up at nine to go to the market with Marcus. It's going to be a long day, but the recursion will be waiting. It's lonely in this house when everyone had gone to bed, but I like it that way. It is good for my writing. Marcus likes to write in bars, but I think that's the showboat in him. I like to do my writing in private - in solitude, if I can find it. But solitude is hard to come by, and loneliness will have to suffice. There's a vast difference between the two, but I'll let you figure that one out by yourself. I'll wish you luck. Anyways, feel free to come back in a couple of days. I think it would be good to give it all some space before the final part. I know I'm going to. As always, you can do what you want, but you've got my take. Put this down for a couple days, and maybe start writing something of your own. But come back, and we'll put this thing to rest. So I'll see you in a couple days. Goodnight.
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